Draft 2 Audience Feedback

I asked a group of people who were in the editing room to watch my short film and give me some feedback on it. It was important that I didn't know these people so that they weren't biased and gave me an honest opinion. 

I got responses from boys and girls, and they were around the same age as me, so they fit in my target audience. Their responses were: 

I also sent my film to friends, family and the actors who were in the film to see what they thought of it.

 


 

I also showed the film to the relatives of one of the people who the film is based on. They cried, meaning that my film provokes a strong emotional response which is what I wanted it to do, I wanted it to make people stop and think about the people in their lives and how dementia effects us all. 

Summary

• My film provoked a strong emotional response
• The narrative is understandable and easy to follow 
• It displays the symptoms of dementia and what its like to care for someone with dementia in a believable and relatable way 
• There are some changes I could make to the editing of my film to make it better. It was suggested that I lower the saturation of the flashback scenes to make them stand out more as separate to the present day scenes.