**Post dates have been changed so that all of my work from the different products I have made (short film, poster and double-page spread) are grouped together and therefore not all dates reflect when work was originally posted.**

Friday, 26 January 2018

Cutting out Scenes 7 and 8

I have decided to cut out scene 7 and scene 8 (the bedroom scene). I have chosen to do this because


  • My film already looks as if it is going to be too long
  • It doesn't add much to the narrative
  • I don't like how I filmed it
  • This is the part of the script I am least proud of, I rushed writing it a few days before we filmed it. This also led to a lot of improvisation by the actors, and although they were fantastic, overall this was the part of the narrative I was least happy with. 

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