I have decided to cut out scene 7 and scene 8 (the bedroom scene). I have chosen to do this because
- My film already looks as if it is going to be too long
- It doesn't add much to the narrative
- I don't like how I filmed it
- This is the part of the script I am least proud of, I rushed writing it a few days before we filmed it. This also led to a lot of improvisation by the actors, and although they were fantastic, overall this was the part of the narrative I was least happy with.
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