**Post dates have been changed so that all of my work from the different products I have made (short film, poster and double-page spread) are grouped together and therefore not all dates reflect when work was originally posted.**

Saturday, 3 February 2018

Draft 3 Teacher Feedback


  • Add an ending 
  • Re-record the sound from exterior scenes and kitchen scene
  • Less cuts - kitchen scene
  • Sound - add echo filters to sound to signal its the end of the flashback and to sound bridge into the next scene maybe, to make it flow better
  • Title sequence - 'presents' 
  • End credits 
  • Statement at the start of the credits e.g. facts/stats about dementia

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