- Add an ending
- Re-record the sound from exterior scenes and kitchen scene
- Less cuts - kitchen scene
- Sound - add echo filters to sound to signal its the end of the flashback and to sound bridge into the next scene maybe, to make it flow better
- Title sequence - 'presents'
- End credits
- Statement at the start of the credits e.g. facts/stats about dementia
**Post dates have been changed so that all of my work from the different products I have made (short film, poster and double-page spread) are grouped together and therefore not all dates reflect when work was originally posted.**
Saturday, 3 February 2018
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